Score: 9

"neaaat..."

submission: Make Your own Character

date: October 14, 2006

It's a very basic dress-up game and very cute.. ^^

Nothing too new...

Hmm... But I have to admit that I'm more interested than the whole concept of the dress-up. What is it, exactly? It's really intriguing...

Maybe it would be better to make a story? An RPG? AMV? IHJH?<---- (nah, kidding... *_*) I can see that a dress-up game is way too simple for your talent. You can do more than just clothes. (why do i suddenly feel I sound gay?...)

I like your style; a bit more original than the rest. It's very distinct. You should be proud!

I'm keepin' me eye on YOU

(* D <--- one-eyed ( lameness...)

Score: 10

"ahahha!!"

submission: Create Clock Animations

date: October 14, 2006

I don't have to stay in NG long enough just to understand the humor in this flash. The Wade stick was HILARIOUS and the lessons were just darn funny!.. X D ahahhaa... [ I like the animating-your-character bit.. X ) ]

(At first, I really thought that you made this flash as a Clock Crew Movie-Generator Flash Program thingy to support the Clocks in making their movies... Guess not... O_o' ) That didn't even make any sense!! O_O

I just really have to rate this high!!... (: D

For the Clocks! XD

Score: 8

"Aww... pumpkin!!"

submission: The Pumpkin Plot

date: October 14, 2006

I did feel suspense for a while. The narration was really good and I felt the creeps. But I think this lacks somewhat the "element of surprise" since I was already caught offguard by the atmosphere then... downhill midway the flash.... You could've pushed the limit a bit further by making the pacing faster and the ending a bit more "tragic" so we can pity the pumpkin in the end... O_O It was a teeneeweenee bit obvious how the story ends because of the hint the other pumpkin gives, but you did do a great job for something that only took a while.

The voice actors were also great! They sounded like real professionals. But the hill billy voice guy somehow didn't get the whole thing right. I think that his voice "reverts" back to his original sounding voice or something. I'm not sure I can explain that well.. That's about it and I really liked the whole pumpkin thing.

: D

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Score: 8

"ahihihii"

submission: Naruto - Re:member

date: October 14, 2006

... Everyone looked normal except for Tenten!! ahahaha.. She looked like Chun Li!! > . < ... ahhaha... I'm not saying that it looked bad, the graphics are swell. You make really good original sprites.. ^^" But, it would probably be better if you had standard-sized sprites because I just lmao when Tenten came out like THAT.. Well, I know it's tough because it's sprite and all. Hmpmpfff.. .pffft.. But really... Tenten was HUUUGE... O_O... hahha...

I give 10 for humor... hahhaha.... ( ' > .<)

awesome amv.. ^^

Score: 10

"Waheehee! This is loads of fun!"

submission: MoreLikeBlue

date: October 12, 2006

Someone finally gets the whole ninja-thing right! Such cool randomness! Really reminds me of Invader Zim... O_O...

Weehee... The cuteness... * v *

And the ROBO 2000 theme is just... wharked O_O

Gonna buy meself one... Webcomics are fun!! ^_^

Score: 7

"Missing a few things and showing too much..."

submission: S.I.N :: "Genesis"

date: October 1, 2006

Ok, your anime art is pretty good but I think this flash is way too cluttered. You could've chopped this into finer bits, like put 'em into chapters first. You should've separated the story and grouped characters into different chapters and make them sort of meet one by one.

Overall, It kind of looked like the beginning and the end of the story with an epilogue. Try not to show too much story and dialogue. It really isn't pleasing for us viewers because we already know what's coming up next, we don't even have to speculate.

The graphics are nice but hard to see because of all the black you used... It's like they all pop out of nowhere at random. Try making some of the backgrounds of a different hue like purple or white or something brighter. Also, the music could've been more original. Try to use some that are not showcased. And a better plot would be nice. I realize that with this kind of style, you rarely produce a unique storyline. Try to get inspiration from others besides anime. A lot of people know where you're going at with this style. Be more unique and do something surprising and different.

Score: 9

"Mad Experiment... !!"

submission: penndragon

date: September 30, 2006

I'm new to flash and I'm also experimenting with flash like that! Looks like yours got great results, though.

The girl seems poorly drawn to me, but I understand that adding more details would make her a hell to animate (I know, I've tried...) . I hope this doesn't become a big problem for you in the future.

So, from beginning to end, though, you maintained the whole vibe of the flash and don't put too much or too less of anything either. You also did come up with a new story. It's a good one though, but I have a feeling it'll be harder to take it from here. A good advice for a flash of this scale would be trying to make the story less grandoire and focusing more on the character, which you are doing quite well. That is, if you want to continue making it further...

Good luck on your flash and God Speed... ^_^

Score: 8

"And all this time..."

submission: 10 Things To Do With...

date: September 30, 2006

...I thought dismembered arms were useless! That was pretty good but you probably had to remove the cupholder thing cuz it was lame... I liked some of the queer uses of the arm but some were like, obvious... and lame... But I'm rating you 8 for humor because of your long and hard effort to make this and the Potter joke. O_*

Are you, uh... fond of bricks or something? (Well whatever..)
The brick falling preloader is so cool! I wish I knew how to do that... How do you do that?!.... I ten-ned you style because of that... That'll be all...

Score: 9

"Ehehe..."

submission: asi-Vengeance

date: September 30, 2006

I enjoy seeing A Si portray different roles! He's kind of like an actor now, eh? It was funny when A Si got the perverted role again. For some strange reason it really is starting to suit him.

The graphics are good as usual and your fighting style is so original from the rest I've seen in NG so far. But maybe the scenes could have been faster, I thought that the fan that hit Nechia at the beginning was too slow. I mean, I could've avoided that... Nonetheless, you executed the flash well.

Nechia getting naked became somehow pretty funny to me. Not that I'm a sadistic perv or anything but I guess it's from the music you used. It somehow adds humor and wit to the nakey scenes... Ehehe...

Score: 9

"I always thought oldies were goodies...!"

submission: asi- The Whispering Moon

date: September 30, 2006

Hey, I'm still browsing thorough your works! I must say that you really know how to use your stuff well. I watched the Asi- Dream Fairy first and it felt quite strange to see him here. But you managed to pull it off with this character. It was also as if the music was made for this flash! I really compliment you for your work! Keep it up and keep 'em coming! ^_^